english paper need critiquing

Need a paper tcritqued. Have the assignment questions as well as the finished paper. Need to get an A on the paper and I want to make sure I have answered all the answers completely with no grammer mistakes. If you find any sentence structure, grammer, or parapgraph mistakes please correct them.

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