editing an essay

You should be moving towards an academic tone with correct MLA citations in this assignment. You must use evidence from the text to ask questions, define issues, question dilemmas, or pose alternative readings of the text. We’ll be focusing on skills of summarizing, paraphrasing, and quoting as we start to interact, interrogate, and investigate. The main focus is to consider how this essay is crafted and a conversation that interacts with the text. A clear argument should emerge even if it is implicit.

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Could you add some details in the body paragraphs, like some quotes from the articles. And marked what you added in red?

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